The Adventure of the Great Wall
Dung Yat Yan
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Eugene, Group 1: Fiction, Lingnan University Alumni Association Primary School Hong Kong
In summer, there was a Charity walk for poor people. Lau Bay, Kwan Yu, Cheung Fai decided to
but Ch-O Ch-O didn’t want to walk the Charity Walk, because he wanted to destroy the Great
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Lau Kwan Cheung, three men went to the Eric Lao Bank to get gold but there was no gold. They
went to Legold Bank get gold but there was no gold too. They went to the most special Bank that they could
find, the Legend but…there was no gold either!
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Kwan Yu groaned “Where can we find gold?” Cheung Fai agreed “What about the gold miming my gather
works there for fifty years ago and never comes back home too!” “Let’s go then!” said Lao Bay.
Ding! Dig! Dig! Trap
They walked for miles and miles, to get to the gold mining area. “So that’s why my dad won’t come back
home because it’s too…far!” said Cheung Fai. “We know!” the others said.
They walked and walked and found they are captured by 360 dogs but they were not afraid. Suddenly, a
sword flew by and that was Lao Bay’s Dragon sword. Kwan Yu took something from his back and it was his
Moon-shaped sword and Cheung Fai took his Eight-spot spare too.
The three warriors fought the evil dogs and found a remote control and one of the button said “on/ off.” So
Cheung Fai pressed the on and off button and the evil dogs stopped moving. They pressed another button and
Lao Bay fell in a hole and found 5,000 pieces of gold.
Mess up the wall
They went to the Great Wall. Soon, they walked the Wall but 1,003 soldiers came to stop them. Suddenly a
lightning bolt struck a soldier. Cheung Fai said, “Lightning strikes twelve? Why?” “Because, the clock is made
of light, which stuck by lightning.”
Kwan Yu killed many soldiers. He may have killed 200 of them. Lao Bay was awesome. He drove a dragon
and made the soldiers fly like birds but it killed them. Kwan Yu and Cheung Fai were jealous of Lao Bay. So
Lao Bay used his Dragon sword to make two more dragons. So, it was fair and they flew to the end if the Great
Wall.
Wrong way, wrong place
When they flew to the end of the Great Wall, they didn’t know that they were going to the wrong way.
They saw a temple. Cheung Fai said excitedly, “What are we waiting for, let’s go!” Unfortunately, that was
Ch-O Ch-O’s temple, the evil and the most richest man in China and he was the King. Kwan Yu knew it and told
the others they went the wrong way. So they flew to the opposite way. When they flew to the end of the Great
Wall, soldiers blocked their way. “Oh no!” groaned Kwan Yu. “I have an idea!” whispered Lao Bay. So they
used the idea. First, Kwan Yu and Cheung Fai gave poor old man some gold. Second they made the soldiers
very angry.
The last trick was Lao Bay threw his Dragon sword and all soldiers tumbled. That is the end of the story.
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